2nd Nov 2009, 4:58 PM in Story

Pilot

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Kallum Martin 2nd Nov 2009, 10:58 PM edit delete
Kallum Martin
Please rate, comment, and hopefully lol at this new comic 'a mine ;D

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2gcomic 2nd Nov 2009, 5:16 PM edit delete reply
2gcomic
I think you should slow down a bit. Put more detail into this comic. For example, You could have it like this:
Comic#1: Intro
Comic#2: Lucas wakes up
Comic#3: Mom give parcel
Comic#4: Lucas gets Pokemon (Unless you got something else planned
Comic#5: Lucas goes of to the wild
Comic#6 Lucas arrives at the dock. Cathes boat?


You see how I turned that 1 comic into 6? I know its hard but spend your time and readers will find it more enjoyable. :)
Audeame 2nd Nov 2009, 6:31 PM edit delete reply
Audeame
Should be saved as PNG.
2gcomic 2nd Nov 2009, 7:26 PM edit delete reply
2gcomic
Yes, that too.
Kallum Martin 5th Nov 2009, 3:22 PM edit delete reply
Kallum Martin
Hey 2G, thanks for that, it's just it would take me a week to do one, where as with you it's a day. Do you mind doing a pilot re-do for me?
steve the mew hunter 19th Nov 2009, 4:15 PM edit delete reply
what with all the pokemon spright comics, beside that it seams easy...
2gcomic 20th Dec 2009, 11:20 AM edit delete reply
2gcomic
It's not as easy as you think
steve the mew hunter 22nd Dec 2009, 11:14 PM edit delete reply
as of not too long ago, i found that out the hard way, and i am still working on that guest comic